Tuesday, January 26, 2010
January 26, 2010
My last post was about the topic I thought I was going to do my paper over. Show choir. I feel like I knew too much about show choir to make it a "research paper." I also couldn't find very many sources in our library on show choir. Since the last time I had to post a journal I have changed my mind. I am now going to do my paper over adoption. I am not in this subculture but my cousin did adopt two babies from Russia. I don't know much about the process itself other than it is a long, tedious process. I guess that will be my main question: what is the adoption process entail? I also want to know if it is expensive and whatnot. I have found books in the library and cannot wait to start researching this topic.
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My guess is that adopting a child from another country is a topic in itself. Would you want to focus on this aspect of adoption? Or do you want to look at various options and their advantages/pitfalls?
ReplyDeleteWhat is the working thesis of the research project? how is the process
ReplyDeleteWhat are the strengths of the proposal? having a personal account and good sourcing
What is confusing or missing from the proposal? there are a lot of number mentioned which is confusing
Does the writer discuss the sources listed on the bibliography? yes
What is the writers plan of action? to interview her family
How can the writer improve the organization and styles of the essay? go into more depths on her research
From: Jacob Coz, Anna Schultz and Heather Royse